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Deluge
Absinthe

The sun gathered up
all the summers garland
and mixed with it the heavy
opalescence of pigeon and
crow feathers.

Behind the
neighbors loft I watched
the season lift her dress and
succumb to temptation. I raise
my glass and catch the glimmer
of the lights final hour.

I wait for the collapse
as slow water falls to my glass.
My room brings a lighter mood yet
with a sad face I drag my feet.

The scent
of summer's harvest blooms
as a cadence drifts in
and is gone.

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Absomphe
I liked it better the second time. abs-cheers.gif
Patlow
That's what she said.
Kirk
As the sun gathers it's belongings,
with a look she accuses me
the parrot flies, and I lie to myself, by dreaming of seeing
R3al Caravano
That numbing crack of the knuckle joint,
“I must be getting older”,
as a pull with the other,
the cool wind and my own hands
weathered with the dulled white
letters of my keyboard.
Patlow

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G&C
Rye.
Patlow
You and I, we live and die
The world still spins around
We don't know rye
Rye, rye, rye, rye. rye…
G&C
Rye not?
Patlow
You inspired me. I'm going to buy a bottle of rye today.

Any suggestions?
G&C
Sazerac works for me. 18yr if you can find it.
Patlow
Cool, thanks!

(Nice poem, BTW, Deluge.)
G&C
What, you didn't like mine?

The best kind of poetry.

Simple, elegant & short.
Very short.
Absomphe
QUOTE(G&C @ Nov 5 2010, 09:43 PM) *

Rye.


Wry.
G&C
Wry Rye.
Donnie Darko
Why?

Why not?
Patlow
Rye is a what once left us behind
Rye is a radically idea made clear
Rye is a spastic expression of love from above
Rye is a sporadic contempt in the field from beyond

Rye is a thing that helps us bend on
Rye is a first that seconds so strong
Rye is a flavor sworn once at the sun
Rye is a faggot freaked out can't move on

Rye is a rye is rye is a rye
And I just want rye just want rye
No idea why no idea why
No idea rye…
Donnie Darko
I like the Japanese version:
No idea lie….
Patlow
I just heard the term, "Japanese video vixen" on shit TV. It made me realize, we need more rye.
G&C
Which rye did you end up with?
Absomphe
I'll bet it wasn't wry rye.
Donnie Darko
I eat Ramen noodles at this Japanese place in my old neighborhood called Rai-Rai-Ken.

Does that mean I win the Rye homophone contest?
G&C
Not yet…
Patlow
Austin Nichols "Russell's Reserve" 6 Year Old Kentucky Straight Rye Whiskey. It's G-o-n-e…
G&C
Good rye goes quick!
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